First Two paragraphs and ROUGH outline. (comments are strongly appreciated)

Vision is an ability acquired at birth, and it is from this point in time until death that man tries to surpass what can be seen to what could be seen. An example of man trying to extend its vision capabilities is video games. Publicly marketed in the late 20th century, video “games” where first widely used as combat and flight simulators for the military and its personal to try to cut back on losses. However, when this new technology reached the publics hands it grew at an exponential rate, and now allows for gamers to be who or what ever they choose to be, see, or feel.
The first games published were of basic components and easy to understand, games such as PONG and Space Invaders become the only thing on children’s and young adults Christmas list, it was a world wide phenomenon. Slowly but surely the games just as there players grew, wanting more and subsequently giving more. Newer, more interactive games with an increased difficulty began to rush the market. Games such as Mario and Madden with there new gaming style and A.I. randomization changed the face of gaming forever.









Topic: Video Games

I. Intro
A. Human need to expand vision
B. First break of video games
C. Early implementations

II Early History
A. Simulators
B. Simplicity (Pacman/ Pong)
C. Evolution

III Revolution Begins
A. Sport Games
B. Car games
C. Vision expands
D. CD’s enhance quality
E. New gaming system

IV. 21st Century is pulls the trigger
A. Technology brings new gaming age
B. New 3-D games
C. First person shooters
D. RPG
E. Suspicions and Anti groups form
F. Xbox live

V. Concerns
A. Gaming aspects are to real
B. Ratings are placed
C. Accusations of gaming influence on violence
D. Online interaction unsuitable for kids

VI. Graphics
A. Weapons match those of real life
B. War games introduce gore to gaming
C. GTA opens the doors for Anit-Gaming Org.

VII. Different aspects and human involvement in games
A. Creating your own character
B. What one does now influences what happens in game
C. Games like “Bully” allow you to be or do whatever you want.
D. GTA and Metal Gear Solid lead the killing trend in games
E. Sports games and management option.
F. Create a player mode allows you to live and influence the life of you character.
VII. Conclusion
A. Games as an entirety evolution.
B. Affects
C. Review on vision
D. Final thought

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Paragraphing

>The introduction is the broad beginning of the paper that answers three important questions:

What is this?
Why am I reading it?
What do you want me to do?

In your body paragraphs you should discuss the inquiry process you used to research you topic. Such as, introduce your sources, important information you found, why its dependable and important. Always stay on your topic, focus and relate back to your topic statement
In you conclusion you should restate the original problem, some of its causes, people involved, and state any questions you still have after researching.

Anjela's Interview

So Anjela's writting about TELESCOPES.

She's going to research the history of telescopes, how they originated, who created it, and the general history of telescopes. She is also gong to discuss the parts and over workings of telescopes.
She also wants to focus on advancements and over uses and impacts of the telescope. For example, we talked about the Hubble telescope and its ability to take pictures of stars and moons hundreds of miles away. Also, she is going to include the impact that the telescope has had on the general public, how telescope kits are now being swold to intrigue the younger generations with space. She seems very interested and knowledgable int he subject and seems to be on her way in the paper.

Soldier, pilot, astranaut, and a football player, all are very interesting and succesful careers.However, you cannot do them all in one lifetime,until now. Video games allow owners to become,see, and experience virtualy anythying they want, you can become an athlete, experience a gun fight, or see other planets.

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150 word project brainstorm

So we have to write about how we try to extend our limitations of sight beyond human eye in an attempt to accumulate knowledge that wouldn’t be otherwise available. So when I see and think of this prompt, I go to old times, how did they first come to believe or imagine that there were such things as bacteria, blood cells, algae, plant cells, thing of that nature. I also think of fish finders, radar, microscopes, and a variety of medical tools. I also want to talk about why we try to push our limits and boundaries, and make new doors to open. Also, I think of chemistry and particles and atoms. Then besides looking at small things we can also examine telescopes, the whole universe and galaxy concept. Not only are we intrigued by the small but also by the large. We make space stations and Hubble telescopes to see beyond the naked eye and into uncharted universe.